A truly fantastic piece of work. great use of language and the flow is perfect. also a very sad adn moving poem. excellent work!

This is an excellent poem. It captures the dark feeling of the moment. If you have a chance read my poem "Alone" and tell me what you think about it.

This is an excellent poem. It captures the dark feeling of the moment. If you have a chance read my poem "Alone" and tell me what you think about it.

This is a well writen poem. I love the flow of it! its so smooth and your wording is wonderful. I've read a few of yours and i really like them one of them i found rather funny jus the way you pushed it back in the readers face it made it funny. well awsome job writing looking foward to reading more of your work.

Very good poem dear...

Wonderful job! very sad but very well written. 5/5