by SoRrOwFuL Claire Oct 15, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
PLEASE COMMENT(i need constructive critisism) AND VOTE THANX |
by Angie
Amazing poem! Really well written. You seriously don't need constructive critism! But since you asked i'm gonna say something. You could use punctuation like comma's and periods. You don't have to though, a lot of poeple don't! lol! i don't....its still amazing without it! |
by Tiffani
I am truely at a loss of words this time. you dont need constructive anything, your poems are beautiful and perfect. |
You dont need critisism don't be modest this is amazing and as long as u believe in yourself ull b brilliant n e way please comment and vote on some of mine.. love to ya girly xxx |
by Amy
Wow babe this is truely remarkable! |
by StMario
Good poem, the flow reminds me of my own... I will read more of yours.. I hope that this person you are talking about will one day fine you interesting. GOod luck... |