by `*~1-lUv~*` Oct 15, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
You were my ray of light that brighten up my gloomy world. |
Haha...I'm not really good at poetry myself...so i'm just telling you as a friend...i don't see anything wrong with it...really nice...I love it... |
Content great. I ain't that experienced. |
by JAY Poet
Aww great poem!!!!!!!!! |
by dani
Ur poems are soo expresive, keep ya hed up huni and things always seem to get better whether or not thats how you feel they will...gr8 poem x |