My god! This is sooooooo beautiful! It's soooooo beautiful! You are so talented! keep writing please!!

Wow it very moving i lliked it it had a couple good twist keep writing i liked it definatly a good halloween fav. hey nt meanin to be selfish bt could u check out some o mine it would be great

keep writing :'( HD

Thanks for your comments guys it means a lot this poem means a lot for me. Thanks for voting....I will repay the favor!!

Wow i think that was the best poem ive ever read, very full of emotion and so sweet you've done a very good job. Im surprised more people havent commented on it. Its awesome keep it up

Omg!! dat was a nice poem. You really have a talent 4 dis. You should continue writing. When i first began to read it i was like man dats crazy but when i got to da end i was tripped out. well keep up tha good work and doin wut u do k...bye
~amanda~

I really like poems with a sad story behind it. This has t be one of the best sad poems Ive read so far....I was holding my breath the whole time I was reading this....strange, eh?

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Wow.. you are really gifted.. this poem sent chills down my spine.

Truly amazing.. keep the pen flowing!!

Micro Kouklits xo

Omg omg omg omg omg
that was the best poem ever i swear
omg that is increible i cant explain how good it was......
that deserves a ten but i can only giv it 5:(
keep it up.....so friggen good

OMG...that is a true masterpiece...WOW...ur rhyming r good...and ur flow is even better...this is the best I've seen so far...u really r a talented writer...not to mention truly gifted...well...I hev nothing more 2 say about this masterpiece...if I can...I'll give a 10 4 this...AWESOME WORK...

Thanks guys it means so much for me to hear the lovely comments that you are writting about my work!! Thank-you again
Luv
-Kayla-

This is such a beautiful poem! You're such a fluent writer! It's great because it's easy to understand unlike lots of other poems.

Could you please check out my newest poem??? It's called One Secret ...

I'd have given you more than 5 if i could

Wow wow wow. I've got goosebumps! I liked how you ended it, it's simple and straightforward, but has much effect.

Awww v good xxxx=)

Excellent poem....absolutely great mate...this one the best ive ever read..keep it up!!:)
xxx

You didnt write this. this my friend, is copyright and im turning you in

Omg!!!!! that is like soooo goood!!!!

Katie Bennett is right. I "googled" it, and someone else wrote it and copyrighted it. Sorry.

This poem gave me shivers.
I Cried.!

Great Poem