by Mona Oct 15, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
The dad I have never known. |
by Stephy
Aww hunn is that true? im so sorry if it is...he's missing out big time...**hug** |
by Jen
Oh, wow, thats awesome! Great job expressing that! I'm sorry about your dad, even if you didn't know him. Well, keep writing! |
Wow! i like this poem. I especially loved the line " Guess what's loved cannot be hated" |
by Rosie
Awwww. You are very true hun. Even though he did not kiss you or say goodbye, he is still your dad and if it wasnt for him, you wouldnt be here either. I'm glad you and your mum made it too. A lot of emotion was put into this poem and i feel a lot of hidden feelings too. well written. :) Keep up the good work hun! You are an amazing poet |
Hey great poem yet again! this stanza doesnt really make sense tho... |