Awww thats a very sad poem, but very good too! ur a good writer, keep it up xxxx

Thank you so much for your comment! It really made me smile. If you have msn or AIM you can add me for sure!! You're a great writter and I hope you keep writing. Remember smile it gives you 5 seconds of happiness but if you smile more ;) it will lead to endless happiness!! 5/5

Smile,
Black~Rose

Awww thats well sad! but a great poem, sorry that happened, hasnt to me so i dont know how u feel *hugs*

love mark xxx

I really feel for you
I wish me and you could swap lives
You deserve to know your da while I'm sitting here wishing I didn't
I suppose life doesn't treat everyone right
You and your dad deserve a chance while my dad deserves diddly squat!!
I'm sorry
take care
love kirsty xxx

Im scared my little boy will feel like this, thats what 'remember you're his daddy' is about. i really like your poem, very emotional. well done hun x

Hey great poem yet again! this stanza doesnt really make sense tho...

"I was only a couple of months,
He must have loved me tons,
To leave his innocent daughter,
Not even look back and bother."

it kinda says two different things at once. but its still a great peom!
hannah

Awwww. You are very true hun. Even though he did not kiss you or say goodbye, he is still your dad and if it wasnt for him, you wouldnt be here either. I'm glad you and your mum made it too. A lot of emotion was put into this poem and i feel a lot of hidden feelings too. well written. :) Keep up the good work hun! You are an amazing poet
Rosie xXx

Wow! i like this poem. I especially loved the line " Guess what's loved cannot be hated"

Mind if i use that afor my frinds and also my own quotes site? 5/5

~stevie~
~yellowfeverlime~

Oh, wow, thats awesome! Great job expressing that! I'm sorry about your dad, even if you didn't know him. Well, keep writing!

Aww hunn is that true? im so sorry if it is...he's missing out big time...**hug**