Nice beginning but poor ending!

Nice beginning...and ending as well...lol...well...now I'm going to work on some new poems...thank u so much for ur comments...I am glad I found u 2...

Nice poem, another one that is uniquely you which I enjoy very much. Great writing. I haven't seen any new stuff from you in a while, so I thought I would enjoy some of the old. Best to you Matt.

-Tainted Mikochan