by shawn hoskins Oct 15, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I wish i could just see her face just one more time, a tear hits your picture as i sit here crying, maybe one day someone else will ease the pain inside, but that's hard to find since the day you left me behind, everything happens for a reason i know thats true, but you leaving me this way turned the sun into the moon, everybody asks me if theres anything that they can do, but the one thing that can heal this heart of mine left when i lost you, somethings you just can't change you try to take them them back but their memory remains, i guess i'll just have to move on since your love for me is gone, leaving me here lonely staring at a cross and a stone. |
Wow i really felt the emtion in this poem! |
by munkee04
I loved this poem, thank God you kept writing...i read your "last poem"...but its good that you kept writing...Its so hard, when you lose someone you really love, and i like the way you expressed what you felt, and what you were doing!It is a very good poem! |
by LuvMeAlwayz
Amazing! short but emotional |
Wow, short but very deep 5.5 thx for r/c on my poems |
by Katlynn
OMG!!! this one is really sad. Wow. i thought she like dumbed you and stuff not like died. OMG!! i'm so so sorry if this is true. i hope everything will get better. You did an amazing job. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever. |