I love the way you write your poems. They have so much emotion and feeling. Just like this one. Defiantly a 5/5.. Keep writing and take care xx:

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Don't beat yourself upover him or whatever he is he's not worth it...!!!.!

Wow, your poem is breathtaking. It relates so much to me, that its kinda scary. My father left me before I was born....And well I will never ever tell him that I love him. Because I don't, I just feel hate for him leaving me. I know how it feels to see everyone with dads and saying, "Why can't I have a father like that." If you ever want to talk, you can just IM me or email me. Great poem.
5/5
~*Amber*~

Wow this poem is so powerful i luv it hun...great job as always...thanx for the comment hun but im not much of a writer anymore, just not satisifed with anything i tried writing...but i see u dont have that problem...anyway keep it up hun...and keep that head up..

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I wanna take ur poems and mine and send them to my dad lol he told me once he wished I would die , and i've only seen him twice

awsome write hun keep it up

Great poem and tnx 4 the comment

Ooh baby sorry that had to happen.. but wonderful poem 5/5

Thats so sad....i'm sorry for what he's done to upset you and make you feel this hatred towards him...stay safe...well done great poem...again i can relate
luv kate