This was very..... morbid... but its was really goood anyways n_n... teehee..

That was awesome.. I reread it like three times to get the full feeling of it. I always love dark poems and this was awesome!

Wow. that was awesome. a little creepy, but awesome! 5/5

@...wow...amazing!;)
really well written!
dark and intaking!;) Loved it~...@

Love this poem very good read mine mabye ull like them

Great job! wow i love all of this poem.. especially this stanza:
I might want you again
so I hid you under my bed
I don't even care
that you're already dead.
It really just stuck out & i loved it. I also loved this one:
You can feel the pain
oh god, I feel it too
the only difference between us
is that I actually want you.
ok so i could go on & on & eventually put the whole poem in here cause i loved ALL of it. Great job! 5/5*

I love ur poems!
its so simple
not foreced almost antural
well fkn done
xoxoox

Awesum stuf i really enjoyed reading this one ...great flow

*~CrImSon__TeArS~*

Wow this was exactly the right length and very well set out...
It's also extremely dark... and frighteneing, the language perfectly suited the genre
Excellent :)

WOW FREAK DANG!!! this was an excellent poem.. your an excellent writter.. it had a great flow.. and it was just overall excellent 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Wow! It's such a dark poem! I really liked it. Very well written!

5/5 even if im not into the dark poem thing... i really like it... it captured me so much... nice job and keep writing!

~angel~

Are you really like this are you a murderer coz most of your poems are a bout this alex xx