Wow the use of words was really truely brathtaking. I would never be able to come up with something liek that. I have no suggestions because it was really that good lol. keep it up!

Wonderous job, great imagery.

I love the word usage there. Truely amazing.. Great imagery as well. I love the last two stanzas; 5/5 great job! Can't wait to read more

Not really my type of poem, but you clearly have a talent for this. It was well structured with a good flow. Well done x

Wow..yep thats all i have to say..so ill say it again..WOW..yep

Very well written poem.
Great choice of words, i liked it alot

Thanks for your comment, i really appreciate it.

xxx cici xxx

I really like how this poem was written. Great poem. keep it up

Wow...so much emotion...5/5