I really with i could write like you... that was amazing

Woah great poem, full of description, take care xxxx

Thanks ppl

This is really good, really deep, really expressive and vivid. i like your style only, suicide is so nevada anser. if you kill yourself u go straight 2 hell, or thats wat chris told me wen i told him 2 kill me or i would doit. plz if u eva feel like that make sure u tlk 2 sum1 dont eva take your own life. i luv the poem as long as it is and always will b fiction. and thanks 4 da comments on my poems.

Klisha i just wanted you to know if you need a friend you got one. oh & great poem

Klisha, that was awesome. i loved the emotions that you poured into it. great write hun. 5*5
Kimberly