Wow!!! omg...i love dis poem i really do its da best ur a great writer kepp it up!!! ~*~brandi~*~

Val.... I love this poem. So sad... I"m just glad things are better between you and Hazen now!!! :D I love ya babe!! We are gonna hang out this weekend okee?!?! MUAHZ! And you write amazing by the way. lol

It was very good, but a little long... keep it up, you have talent! ;)