Wow, great poem! i don't know about giving it to ur friend, it depends on how they would take it, because u need friends to support u and be there 4 u. perhaps u could try and explain to them in a more gentle way, but using the poem aswell. hope it goes ok, great writing though,
luv emxxxx

Show it to him...it's the only way he'll ever understand...nice poem girl...5/5