Wow .. is all I haave to say ... I was so in to the poem though out the whole thing .. it was written excellently and juss drew me in .. I couldnt help but jump from line to line .. it was really good .. keep it up .. 5/5

Nikki...
Wow girl that was something ..
not at all how I thought it was going to end ..
My eyes jumping from line to line I couldn't wait to read the outcome ..
You surely captivated my attention on this one.....
Great poem sweets ...

Nikki,
Great job...You grab the readers attention and this piece makes you want to read on....Superb, you are so talented....

hugs, love, Ann

Whoa! This is so twisted, I wasn't expecting that! It's very well crafted. So captivating and intense. Just wow~Holly

Wow wow wow wow that was sooooo hot i love it