I THINK UR POEM IS AWESOME AND IT IS SO VERY TRUE.NO ONE BUT TEENAGERS KNOW HOW HARD IT IS TO LIVE AS ONE THESE DAYS.IT'S NOT EASY AND SO MANY PPL EXPECT THA BEST OUT OF YOU AND THEY DON'T SEE THA EVERYDAY TROUBLES WE HAVE TO DEAL WITH.I AGREE WITH UR POEM ALL THA WAY.I ALSO THINK U NEED TO TRY UR BEST AND GET IT PUBLISHED.KEEP WRITING I ENJOY READING THEM.I RATED U 5/5! BE GOOD AND GOD BLESS! *Heather May*

Cute poem and very easy to relate to. I love the point you are putting across and i think you did a great job. 5 out of 5!!!!!

The flow was real choppy on this and the title was not really atuned too the message of the poem. I think it started that way then you got lost in a thought and it took over. You made a more general type poem more of a personal nature or a soap box speech. nice try maybe next time Plot121