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by Torn   Oct 16, 2005


I'm standing on the tracks,
No tears, just stunned.
Waiting for that time,
After all, i was shunned.
I'm impatient, my nerves grow,
I can see around the bend.
My long awaited fate,
This, what will cause my end.
My feelings are mounting,
But i'm not scared at all.
Just thinking of this life,
And what has caused me to fall.
Was it my lack of love,
Or my betrayed trust?
Was it my environment,
Or my forbidden lust?
Was it my constant battle,
With a war i cannot win.
Was it the pain i inflict,
My every little sin?
Whatever it is,
It has been painful and long.
And I wish to end it all,
I can no longer be strong.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    Hey that was deep. very heartfelt and so nice! I like ur poems and the way you write. amazing work!!!
    keep up the good work
    Lov
    NemO x0x0x0x0x

  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    I can't say I have ever read a bad poem written by you and this is no exception. Another great work as always, though it could use a title, only because that would make the whole poem stronger, but it is brillant none the less. Thank you for commenting on my poems. Love ya hunni!

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • 18 years ago

    by Nearly but not quite

    5/5 again, and once again, please don't go, it's much more fun being alive than dead even if oblivion does seem like a rather attractive prospect!
    Luv Helen xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by ♥•oOo MaDdiSoN ♥•oOo[[i LuV JoSiE]]

    Great poem hun! hang in ther! u r really talented! 5/5 thanx 4 ur comments! it means a lot, keep shining! mwah

    maddy xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    You are a strong girl...I know you are...and I just have to read this poem over and over again...no kidding...it's so good...and you do not wish to end it all...I always say that too...but I didn't end it...see...I'm still here...luv ya...keep up the great work.

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