Aww hun, another excellent poem, you'vedone great work with this one, i could realyl feel the emotion and it was very expressive, uniqueness to it aswell, great work lubbed it hun keep it up lubbz you

Be strong girl, try as much as possible to be. Something good is most likely waiting for you. Humans have a short life, so it is better to enjoy thr few good moments, then to regret the bad ones.

Tim

See i don't know if what im thinking of this poem is stupid or not if you were to ask me what i thought was happening in this poem i woulda said you were standing in front of a train ready to die......and you hinting by saying tracks, and around the bin, but you really should have said what was actually going on kinda confusing and lost here. however i liked the way it read, GREAT vocab!!!!!!!! 5/5

Wow... this is a really good poem hun!!
u can still be strong though. i know you can. i'll be home soon... miss you.
love u.
take care, xoxoxo

Gosh you just took the words out of my mouth xxx

You are a strong girl...I know you are...and I just have to read this poem over and over again...no kidding...it's so good...and you do not wish to end it all...I always say that too...but I didn't end it...see...I'm still here...luv ya...keep up the great work.

Great poem hun! hang in ther! u r really talented! 5/5 thanx 4 ur comments! it means a lot, keep shining! mwah

maddy xxx

5/5 again, and once again, please don't go, it's much more fun being alive than dead even if oblivion does seem like a rather attractive prospect!
Luv Helen xxx

I can't say I have ever read a bad poem written by you and this is no exception. Another great work as always, though it could use a title, only because that would make the whole poem stronger, but it is brillant none the less. Thank you for commenting on my poems. Love ya hunni!

-Tainted Mikochan

Hey that was deep. very heartfelt and so nice! I like ur poems and the way you write. amazing work!!!
keep up the good work
Lov
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