Oh...nice one...let it out...shout if you want to...this is full with emotion...really good...

Well, I must say that the poem has great emotion. Maybe break up the poem into stanzas?

". . . wanna. . . " << Want to.

There were a few things, such as the above [[slang]], that need to be fixed.
But, it had flawless flow, emotion, and everything.

5/5