Lovely!
The rhyme, the general feeling, and the topic...the flow was also good.

Good Writing!
beth

Wow you are awesome at writing
keep up
5/5

This is a beautiful poem Jerry...I hope your wish comes true

Good work, this poem is very well written. Nice rhyme scheme throughtout the poem.

Amazing job once again. Your very talented i must have to say. And i really enjoyed this poem also. It seems like you let someone go that you loved very much but if you think about it , it was never your fault, yeah maybe you let her go but maybe you thought was for the best. Maybe you thought she could've done better and you didn't want to hold her down. There's so many reasons why people let there loved ones go but it's okay, it's alright. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever..

Rythem and rhymes are put together great. It's a great poem with so much emotion. You are a wonderful poet.