Awww wow ben, ur gonna make me and naomi cry. u really put alot of emotion it to tht. great job.
luv becca x

Wow, it made me want to cry so much emotion. It was great! Keep up the good work 5/5
Juls

This poem is about my family and how I failed them because I couldnt become all that they wanted me to be. I love them very much. I will never give up trying.

Ben, i know i have already commented but i feel as if my comments should really come from my heart this time. Ben, u never failed them, my father gets disappointed in me at times and all families will agrue and fight but deep down they love you with all they're heart and are truely proud of you. They just really need to know tht you feel like this and then you will see how much you are truely loved. By family, by friends and...by me.
love, becca.xox

P.S ur comments for my poems were very sweet and understanding,i cant stop reading them and i cant stop thinking bout you. love ya. xx

Aww honey, this was a great poem. Very heartfelt, and no one can truly fail their family. Every family has its problems, and parents are hard on kids, but you can never fail them in my opinion. They want the best for you. Dont be so down on yourself hun. My family is constantly disapointed in me, but I keep on trying to please them. Well, amazing poem, and again dont be so hard on yourself, you didnt disapoint them. You ever need someone to talk to I'm here for ya. Haha, im only 14 and you may think what can a 14 year old do? Oh well, Im mature for my age, so im here if ya need to talk. urbanchick13@hotmail.com

Really really great, lurveee it. well donexx

Wow. unbelievable poem 6/5

Wow thats great, i love it, its a great piece of writing, well done xXxGenevievexXx

As i said before you are very talented indeed just they way you write makes the poem so wonderful
keep up the really good work

Now this is what i call a poem....so meaningful, insightful too..i can feel the emotion coming off this poem..

great work,

october xx

Ooh sad and pretty. I like.