I loved it. But I think it would sound better if " You wasn't.." was changed to you weren't.. idk. It's still very well written. Defiantly a 5/5 none to less. *> : PainOfOne

Thanks for the comments both
Yeah I shall change that to make it easier fankoo :)
I'm so unknown didnt quite understand it
The point of it is so that the meanings disguised because the person I wrote it for I dont really want them to know its about them
but its not one of my best thanks any way
Take care byee xxxx

I was meant to read this one because you told me 2...lol....I really like this one because it is about someone reading something that they was not meant to...Well done 5/5

This one is a little confusing but it's still really good
i like the single lines after verse or whatever it's called x