Beautiful poem
very well written
nice rhyming
reminds me of my life...
u should read "murder or suicide" by me...u may be able to relate
awesome work
i gave u 5/5
love
amy

Wow..great write...I loved it..Thank you for the comment i really appricated it...Love Joclyn

Hey great job you really are a talented writer.. thanks for the comment on mine. keep up the good work =D

I love this one honey, awesome job!

Wow baby this poem was excellent. I have been there and i am now trying to get over that stuff but I can still really relate to this poem and it really touched me. 5/5

-Mikochan

Very well written. a very powerful piece; you can feel the despair within each stanza. good imagery. a sad write, although very relatable, you have captured the concept perfectly for the miserable, lonely path that it truely is. well done. take care, ok.

My name is katelyn i live in the next state over in rhode island, i lyk ur poem it was good.

Good poem! You are a really good writer!

-Kyleene

Great poem,wonderfully written. So many people have been there including myself and that was on the spot!!!
~~Sweetie

That was...different. I've never read anything quite like that. It was good though. I liked it bunches. 5/5

Ravyn

Good poem, very descriptive! I have a silmilar called here I am! I really liked it there was a lot of emotion in it and the flow was really nice, I feel that you "walk" should have went on a little longer though...........

-ann