Depressed...

by Natalie   Oct 16, 2005


I'm standing here
as everyone smiles
and laughs

I seem to laugh along with them
and smile at sudden things
but no one knows
that I'm depressed

I wish I could smile
and laugh
the way I used too
I try
but all I can hear
is a fake laugh
it just sounds so dull

I wish I could laugh
with the warmth of my heart into it
I wish I could move on
I wish I didn't have to be this way

My heart is so torn
so broken
and so shattered

I don't know
If I could trust love again...

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  • 18 years ago

    by lOVER

    Hiya :D really awesome, i really liked the two last stanzas.
    But somethings missing from the:
    I seem to laugh along
    and smile at sudden things
    but no one knows
    that I'm depressed

    I don't know why
    and I don't know how
    but you got me to be depressed

    its good but your repeating some words like that im depressed and but you got me to be depressed

    it doesnt have a flow to it coz ur repeating it, so just fix it so its more rhythmic and ur poem'll be the best !

    have fun, good job!

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