Awww. How sad and yet so sweet. Man, I have felt this very same way, time and timae again. You expressed the feelings of longing perfectly!
Beautiful work, Ann!

Ann my mommy! What is going on?! :( I too felt the pain in this peice but have to say loved it deeply! I just love your poems..they flow right of the tongue when I read it! Your words are jsut so meaningful and sometimes I know what the next line will say without reading it! I love your stuff Ann..hope your doing good..i love you!
~Chelsey~

0hh ann that was really t0uching. whts g0in 0n? such a heartfelt piece. very well written but! keep em c0ming

Wonderful poem, so honest full of deep emotion and hearfelt. I think alot of people can relate to what you have written. It holds a lot of meaning to the reader.

Really enjoyed it, look forward to reading more.

Kisses
Hayley

Ann, this is beautiful. If it was driven by real emotion then I am so sorry for your pain. If not, then I am envious of your talent, to produce such wonderful work without the emotion.

Very passionate and so heartbreaking. It's a sad thing when love isn't meant to be. A beautiful poem conveying just that, well done~Holly

Awww..so much emotion..and feeling. wonderful amazing job..that was so sweet...5/5...great job..
Crystal

WOW...im speech less..that was really good!!

Thats really sweet and sad nice job!

This poem really hits me cause somthing that happened to me too. it sux ass!!!!!! but keep writing this poem was really good.

Hey! That was really well written... I always try to put my feelings into words and I never really feel I can. That however caught alot of feeling in it. Well done... *sigh* that unanswerable question, 'How could you hurt me?' Unfortunately I think everyone asks that atleast once in their life.

Great poem. I really liked it.

*Blood Shot Eyes*

Good one

AWWW woah! Such a great poem..i can relate 2 it 2...GREAT POEM!

This poem really touched me. i almost shed a tear........swar. i love your poetry its always so deep.

Brought tears to my eyes but that only proves that your work truly touched me! :) Thanks! xoxo

I really liked This one.It was cute

Wow very touching poem, i couldnt help but cry myself when i read it. it brought back so many memories of when i felt liek that only so long ago. i loved this poem. it was greaet and very well writtin. keep writing
xoxo
samara

Love it...verying touching, i guess i can say it happen to me once...will take care !

Great poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!