Wonderful job Ann, nice work!!!

I liked this poem a lot. you seem to have touched many people with it, in ways i could never manage. well done, you deserve it. jay.

The emptiness is a consuming monster that eats until you are gone.

This is the reason I keep coming back.

Shelby

Sorry for you pain.. I know exactly how it feels.. I feel the hurt as I read your beautiful poem.. brings it all back.. stabbing of my heart.

Another beautiful piece hun, I really love your poems. You are one of the best poets i know. I didn't even know there were different names for different types of poems. lol. Well you taught me something there. A good poet and teacher. haha! All my love Amanda xxxx

Thats such a beautiful but sad poem :(
emotions expressed well...
one of my favorites

Ann, This poem speaks universally! Perfectly penned. 5/5

I think my grandma with no eyes could write better than this
please, find a new job,
love,
the munchkineater

Oh my god. I know this doesn't really matter, but when I read this, it was like a poem that actually says almost everything I feel about an experience I had (and am still sort of living.).
I think this poem is really, really well written.You showed alot of emotion in it, and I feel as if I really understand what you're getting at and where you're coming from.
So, can a "good job" suffice?;)

I really like/ enjoy reading ur poetry

Ann, That was a beautifully sad poem my friend. I can't believe I haven't read this one before. Absolutely awesome!!