Suicide Asleep

by Katie Bennett   Oct 16, 2005


A forsaken blade
Revealed silent pain
Blood thirsty metal
Is set to my vein
I cant stop it
This unhealthy obsession
I've done it for years
Without learning a lesson
I'm coated in denial
As the blood begins to slice
Blood coats everything
Touched by this harmful knife
Blood starts dripping
As I start to cry
I think why I'm living
If we're living to die
Soaked in blood
I lie on the floor
I told you once
Life isnt worth it anymore
The room darkens
Heavy eyelids grow
The pain, the hurt
I just let it go
I los tlifes battle
I have been beat
Now and forever I'm
Suicide asleep

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  • 19 years ago

    by scoopy

    Damn! that poem is waz good, u had a good flow and u made ur rhymes make sense. yeah that waz a hella good poem if u could check sum of mine out and show me sum love and tell me wut i need to work on and wut i am doing good at! but yeah back to u u did an awsome job on this poem!! 2 5's!!! luv always Scoopy!

  • 19 years ago

    by Twisted Mind Broken Soul

    Hey that is really good, it really touched me alot b/c your poem expresses me all the way, I cut my wrist and well just lets say I LOVE YOUR POEM

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