Comments : Only in fairy tales.

  • 19 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    GREAT POEM KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!CHECK OUT SOME OF MY POEMS!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacob M Parnell

    Thanks

  • 19 years ago

    by boo boo

    I like your poems, your a great writer, send me an e-mail some time ,tooloo_92@hotmail

  • 19 years ago

    by Catherine

    Very insightful. impressive

  • 19 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Gr8 again! lol thats all i can think 2 say!
    ~ME~

  • Good thing to write about, specially since it's different, I really like the message it's trying to get through
    Loving all your work so far hun, keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by swill

    Omg that snapple thing really got me hooked to your poem!!
    its absolutely beautiful...just a suggestion...maybe you could improve the line "before the y all become women n men"...it sort of breaks the flow

  • 17 years ago

    by theking

    Good poem as u said Enjoyable poem.
    keep the good job up