by Jamie Oct 17, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I would realllllly like title suggesstion for this!!!!! |
by Tiny Reader
Again your use of imagery is very effective and your style is unique. very imaginative. I love your writing. |
by HansRik
Ay ay ay, this was truly an excellent poem! The diction was so captivating and the structure so precise! The title is appropriate to the poem, but still a bit vague (maybe mention putrefaction or something that comes from within.) This poem is nevertheless incredibly written and is truly a work of art. The imagery is grotesque and very unique. I liked it a lot. Well done. |
by ScarletHaze
Omg this was yet another brilliant poem! i wish i could write half as well as you! well keep it up and take care xox |
by Ixora
Wow amazing poems and such vivid words. keep it up and thank u for ur comment. i wrote some poems but i wont be able to post them for a while; parent s hit u know...anyway keep it up ur great |
by Shy
Wow this is a great poem. the title is perfect just the way it is. |