O....MY....GOD!!! I love this poem and could really feel all the emotion pouring out of each word! Great job, but I always like leaving a suggestion so I would say change this line:Locked
Never to give back what they stole
It seems to long or something. actually...don't change it, its perfect! Good job!!

Wow big vocab lol It was a nice change great write 5/5 I can normally guess what the last word in a sentence is gonna be but with this poem I was left on my toes
awsome , keep it up

Fantastic dark poem with excellent metaphors

Wow omg...that was amazing. Like michael, i love the work of metaphors and u did this so well!!
awesome work hun
take care xoxo

WOW! I really liked this poem. And I think the title you have right now fits perfectly with this poem. Great job writing it! I enjoyed reading it!

Love always,
~BJ~

Wow this is a great poem. the title is perfect just the way it is.
Shy

Wow amazing poems and such vivid words. keep it up and thank u for ur comment. i wrote some poems but i wont be able to post them for a while; parent s hit u know...anyway keep it up ur great

Omg this was yet another brilliant poem! i wish i could write half as well as you! well keep it up and take care xox

Ay ay ay, this was truly an excellent poem! The diction was so captivating and the structure so precise! The title is appropriate to the poem, but still a bit vague (maybe mention putrefaction or something that comes from within.) This poem is nevertheless incredibly written and is truly a work of art. The imagery is grotesque and very unique. I liked it a lot. Well done.

Again your use of imagery is very effective and your style is unique. very imaginative. I love your writing.