Good job, Noni! This was another GREAT poem! My favorite stanza was:

"Mixing the lies and truths, confusion states my mind
begin to fall to my temptations, and dreams that I had held
In the presence of God, his doing is so ever kind
yet this hole in my heart is forever teared"

Good job and keep up the great work!

Love always,
~BJ~

Lots of emotion in this one, but the lines seems to go on forever. It kinda discourage readers.

My advice is find a way to shorten it a bit. =)

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(")-(") Arrivederci!