This was really well written.. i liked it alot! keep up the great work, stay strong. -peace-

Wow, wow, wow, I love it, it's incredible. did I said I love it? well, I love it. Excellent poem, you're great. I love the way you put the words together and the meaning of it. keep it up. take care.

OMG!! U never cease to amaze me with u're amazing talent. the only suggestion for u is this line:
"But the next I am depressing and angry
And my love for you all cascades down"
should depressing be depressed??

anyway amazing poem and i totally understand. Am always here 4 u k?! take care xoxoxoxo

Wow, amazing poem xx

WOW!!!!!!!!!! What a truly brilliant poem. I could almost swear you wrote it for me. Your words hit home on so many levels. Thankyou for sharing. Again I have to say your writing is inspirational. You have a talent that is rare and very special.

Oh wow, the way it ends, quality x

Nice!!!

Great poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Amazing as always...you are fantastic...your poems are so good...really love it...keep on going...

Wow thats an amazing poem, i loved it! keep it up xxx

Oooo my gosh.... this poem reminds me sooo much of myself!!! I can really relate to this poem!!! Great poem!! powerful expressing your feelings!! I like that!!!

Brilliant poem very powerfully writen