Wow, what an inspirational write!! That was suberb, dicition and flow perfect. A very intelligent, true and somewhat witty poem.

Your friend
Hayley

The lines that I liked the most are these:

But God still speaks to those with belief
With merciful kindness heavenly relief

This a really good poem, great lines. It's also really true, we need to believe.
Keep writing.

I didn't quite get it...do you believe in Evolution or don't you?
I'm sorry, its just that my vocabulary isnt as expansed as yours and I really didn't get some of the fancier words.
Though I'd think that you wouldn't believe in Evolution, because of the poem you wrote called Imagination.
I wrote one about religion too, called Toll Past Heaven's Gate.

-beth

I 100% agree with this. i loved it. most ppl dont write about God and everything. and usually when they do it seems like they're trying to say their right and everybody else is wrong. but this poem didnt feel like this. great job.