Comments : Baccardi Dreaming

  • 19 years ago

    by Atomic

    Yayness! Nice poem!

    Who the Hell voted a one for you?!

    "A party for twelve for one."

    This line took me a while to understand, but when I did, it's creative.

    "Eat my frozen frosting."

    Yeah, and I think we both learnt that it does not taste a lot like ice cream.

    "A thousand and one suns"

    Nice imagery. =)

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    I like this, but I love Baccardi...lol! Seriously, I found this stanza to be so hilarious:

    "When did rocks mean ice?
    And a twist, mean lime?
    Who knows, who cares?
    As I drink to myself."

    Awesome poem, keep it up~Holly