I like this poem. Some days I don't want to wak eup but then I remember that if I don't then my future will be ruined. please read one of mine and tell me what you think.

You've pulled off the concept really well and i like how you've tied other ideas into it. keep writing ^_^

Okey...i won't shoot you...but i won't wake you up either...just so you can have your sweet dreams...but if it's a nightmare...then i'll wake you up...hehe...