Another great success as always!!!>:-)Was it about Kristy.(hope you don't mind me asking.?)keep in touch.
Love Ya L8ter,
CORIE
(sorry so short kinda rushed)>:-(

So much hurt passion
put into a tattered heart
blood seeping through every stich
I hope you two never part

A true expression of your emotional feelings ..
Love hurts sometimes but when it is the right time and the right person it can be beautiful and magical ...

Looking forward to reading more...

U're an awesome poet! keep riting. it can only get better. thanx 4 reading mine.

Beautiful poem, bradley. i love this stanza: i said some things i didn't mean
those things hurt you i know
i wish those words would have never been
i wish i could take back that blow

i've said some things to the one i love before... and i still regret it to this day. anyways, great poem. 5/5 ;D and thanks for commenting on one of my poems!

This is probably one of my favorites

Sup, i love this poem so much. so much passion, it made me tear up! this is def a 5/5 but would be higher, if possible! keep it up.

bubbles or sam

Wow, this is a really good and sweet poem!!! ~Sam~

I liked this work of yours. A good poets pen you have, I think many of us have been in this mood of your poem at least a few times in our lives. nice...

You know I adore your writings...Just wish you were my boyfriend... I know I would never be unhappy! Amazing poem.

Sometimes, there are no second chances.
I did the same. I hurt someone, and I tried real hard to tell her how much I felt ashamed of what I have done.
I never got second chance. I miss her everyday.