~*Thats really good like 5++ i can really relate my dad left me when i was 2 well great work keep it up*~ XoXo

A little pent up hostility I think.

THIS IS UR BEST POEM....
5/5
i really liked it,
its such a common problem
but yet so unique to the person suffering
im gonna add u as one of my favourites on the site
hope u write more
let me know when u do...
i'll definately read them
ps:if u find time do check out my featured poems...
love
amy

So much painful emotions in this poem ...I find writing is the best way to release and vent my anger ..
Heartbreaking and emotional poem ...
Let it all out hon ... and I hope someday he realizes what a donkey's a*s he is ... ~Hugs~

Thats so sad
great job
i love it
5/5

I like it a lot.Its realistic.That's how I fell about my dad..he did the same thing to me and my mom.I continue to comment on ur poems ;plz do the same 4 me.XOXO

I loved this poem. It`s great. But so sad, and so true. That`s what happen to a lot of children, and even though I in no way can relate to it, I still feel so sad for those children who`s parents don`t give a shit. Great poem.. Keep it up :)

Lets keep it that way A.T.L

Hey is this ur boy? id=f he is he sound liek his not worth ur time, great poem
like the way you writtin it
keep strong,
mel

Only one word descrides this poem "WOW"

I loved this poem.. it was really written well.. it was heartfelt, and sad.. i could feel the pain and anger unleashed! keep writting!! please read and comment on some of my poems, thanks! kirsty palmer xx

OK, i love this poem so much. Sometimes i wished my own dad would leave, but the bastard never did. id be a lot better off emotionally.anyways 5/5..great job!!

Its sad but its a good poem 5/5

Great poem, what a great way of telling a sad story x

HEy dang that was good i wish something like that could of been writt'n to my father or my brothers father when we were younger!!!! I give you a 5/5

Wow that just blew me outta my seat!i loved it alot!!! great job!!!

Awww thats such a strongly written poem but its very good x x x x

This one is good if a guy was to leave his son and wife 100/100

5/5 OMG THIZ POEM WAZ 2 GOOD! GOD U SPOKE THE TRUTH ON THIZ ONE, I HOPE U KEEP WRITING CUZ U GOOD AZ HELL

MUCH LUV
PEACHEZ

I think the examples used to bring this piece to life are wonderfully chosen and that the point behind it was expressed not only clearly and passionately but beautifully as well, in it's own sort of way.