Comments : Learning to breathe

  • 19 years ago

    by amelia

    This poem is wonderful
    wish i could be so strong to write somethin like this...
    im not...
    ur poems are real good for a beginner
    5/5
    love
    amy

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    This flowed well. Glad to see that you have a positive outlook for the future. Love does hurt, but it also heals. :)