Seams of Forgiveness

by RadianceInReverse   Oct 17, 2005


These seams of forgiveness
are coming undone
Completely wasted on you
I can no longer stand your lying
and you constantly denying
The things that you've done
You've broken my heart
so many times to the point that
not even these rhymes
can mend the rips and tears
that your sharp and hurtful words
created
this thread isn't even strong enough
to keep the holes closed
Because you've hurt me so bad
all the seams are popping lose
because of you my trust
in anyone is dying
so this is the last time I waste
any-day of mine on you
and your painful ways!!!

This came from another idea from my 11yr old friend Kameron(plz comment)!!!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by JEFF

    Ok did the eleven year old friend write this, or did you, who ever it did. I think its brilliant. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Mighty442

    I quickly grasped the concept of this poem though the spelling of the key word took away a bit. All in all if the objective was to get your point across it accomplishd that.

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