I don't know what i like about this..it's sort of coy
like yes you hurt me && hate me all you wish but i'm done with this...

Nice, very, very dark...but the words you chose made it sound good.

Good Writing!
beth

Ive only realised this was on here of yours im so shocked
but i like it alot great stuff my lil munch bunch
i cant get on msn again so just txt me when you get this
miss ya
love you loads
bye xxxxxx

Great peom lots for feeling
thanks for the comment :)
loads of love
robyn

Wow...sounds like you put your heart in this...bursting with feeling...nice job

5/5