by LadyPearl Oct 17, 2005
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
When the visions around you bring tears to your eyes |
by Atomic
I like the meaning behind this one, my favourite was the first stanza though. |
by BloodScars
Reminds me of a church song lol when i read it i song it, umm second verse last stanza seems a little forced in the rhyming, but keep up the good work |
by Andrea
Very inspirational, you used good wording and it didnt seem like you tried forcing any words or anything. it had a nice steady flow to it. good job! |