Promise of Hope

by LadyPearl   Oct 17, 2005


When the visions around you bring tears to your eyes
and the pain of your family beckons your cry
I will be near to wipe your tears
In your nightmares I am near

Spread my wings, singing my melody
lighting the way to your majesty
I'll be your hope, your strength and trust
bringing home all that's just

I'm promising you sweet child of dark
with all I have inside my heart
things shall be better for you
giving hope is what I do

loving you for everything you are
inside your soul I can reach far
Forever with you till I die
For now I must say Good bye

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  • 19 years ago

    by Atomic

    I like the meaning behind this one, my favourite was the first stanza though.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 19 years ago

    by BloodScars

    Reminds me of a church song lol when i read it i song it, umm second verse last stanza seems a little forced in the rhyming, but keep up the good work
    5.5

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    Very inspirational, you used good wording and it didnt seem like you tried forcing any words or anything. it had a nice steady flow to it. good job!