Very inspirational, you used good wording and it didnt seem like you tried forcing any words or anything. it had a nice steady flow to it. good job!

Reminds me of a church song lol when i read it i song it, umm second verse last stanza seems a little forced in the rhyming, but keep up the good work
5.5

I like the meaning behind this one, my favourite was the first stanza though.

( )_( )
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(")-(") Arrivederci!