'feet moving uncontrollably to the devils song'
This line just made me stop. It really hit me with something. It's an interesting and effective way of conveying feelings.

'Why can't you find anything more, look past the terror'
this line doesn't seem to fit in with the rhythm of the rest which is usually very consistent.

I like the way you change the form of the 3rd stanza and then go back to the original. And the ending is very final. Doesn't just trail off like many poems.
Excellent.

Excellent poem, i really liked the way u portrayed the way ur feeling its really good xox rc

Great poem, very well written. I like the format. 5/5

Saiya

Very powerful. Your words cut right to the chase, and their form escalates your expression, furrowing the readers brow.

It is a splendid poem of raw emotion.

What's solid emotion if not this, incredible as it is a shout mesched with an aweful cry.

You've an eagle's breath girl, very well done!

I am glad I got to hear your vent.

Hey i realized i never read this poem, don't know how i missed it. it's always good to vent the feelings then to bottle them up. i'm glad your dealing with your feelings. wonderful poem you push through so much emotion all the time.

also about your new poem it keeps kicking me out so i'll just comment here. it's lovely so sad though but filled with such heart. i hope things are going ok for you. i read your profile. i hope things improve and that you can return sometimes soon.

~Jacklyn