Cute little love poem

by Nikki   Oct 17, 2005


I love being so close to your heart but i hate being so far from you Physically. seeing your face ,feeling your warm embrace, being in your arms and hugging you, just talking to you in person. I hope that will come again soon

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  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    This is truly a cute little love poem. Well done :) 5/5, Em

  • 17 years ago

    by Marie

    I just moved from a place where i basically grew up so this poem is extremely close to home for me. I really like the emotion you put into it

  • 17 years ago

    by Hidden Feelings within these Words

    Okay, this one i like alot more. It was siimple, short and said everything. Being only 15, you have alot of time to really be a wonderful writer. As of right now, you are great and show lot's of potential. Continue writing I'll be reading your other poems. =)

    By the way, I've added you to my favorites, so keep putting poems up so I can read, comment and vote for you. =)
    -Ally 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I liked this poem because i could relate to it my best friend lives in another state now! i think this was cute but the flow was off. A good effort though! ~mel

  • 19 years ago

    by Juls

    I know how that is...my best best friend lives acroos seas and i havent seen him for 5 years. Well great poem I love it. Keep up the great work hun.
    Juls

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