HELP ME DON'T HURT ME

by skyfox   Oct 17, 2005


Crushing weight infests the gloom
Dark clouds herald impending doom
Frustration rears its ugly head
Emanating not from those who are dead

Those who profess to love me most
Who help me out - or so they boast
Have wounded me more and trampled my soul
Have quashed my spirit and annihilated me as a whole

No concept have they of the havoc they inflict
No thoughts of implications their actions wreak
Firmly believing they know what's best
Truly forgetting about those laid to rest

Consolation, reassurance and true love is missing
Just a public show of caring yes that is fitting
Truly giving of yourself is too much to bear
Tortured wounds of your own you carry there

Your needs are probably greater than mine
You've suffered and struggled and left living behind
I should step up and be more understanding
Reach out to you and be less demanding.

Rainbows and blue skies seem terribly rare
Feverishly searching I can't find them there
Maybe by merging our strengths no matter how weak
Together we will unearth the miracles we zealously seek

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  • 17 years ago

    by john graver

    Very good write. great word usage. greatly descriptive.

  • 17 years ago

    by john graver

    Very excellent job! The emotions are so deep!

  • 17 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Wow,your so discrptive...thank you for your comments on my poems...i do have a person i can talk to but when ever i really need him he's not there and he doesn't always understand things but at leats it's someone right? anyways wonderful poem:)
    auna

  • 18 years ago

    by Becky

    Hi well i think every1 else whos commented has realli sed it all.
    Im not goin 2 say sorry 4 da death of your loved ones becoz i know wat it feels like and i know dat wateva ppl say it still cant bring them bck, + it wasn't their fault and they did nothing rong so so y shud they say sorry?
    Plz don't think i'm bein orrible n unsensative becoz i no wat ur goin frough, i no i may oni b young and may not no a lot bout alot.

    Your poems are brilliant you rite straight from the soul (alot like me).
    Keep it up!

    Lottsa Luvz Becky xxx

    PS. who cares wat age you are, anibody can be a good writer its wat you feel not wat ani1 else feels!!
    If ani1 says uvawise tell em 2 cum c me n ill sort em out!!
    xXxXx

  • 18 years ago

    by MadelineJayde

    I feel very deeply what you must be going through at the moment. I know exactly what it's like losing people that you love. Thank you so much for commenting on my poem about my 6 lost friends, it means alot to me. You have writeen alot of great poems, keep uo the good writing.
    Love Maddy x0ox

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