Hey i liked your poem...it seems like you're unhappy with him...you should tell him how you feel...i think i'd help maybe...well i dont know...keep up the good work...well l8r, 5/5...jen

Awww. so sad.... amazing writing really....i almost felt like i was her...

Good poem. you can really feel the depression in this. my favorite part is 'Then selfishly every night,
You tell me to spread my legs' but not because its about sex. i just think it was very well worded. please feel free to read more of mine and rate and comment, thanks.

Brad