Paradise (tanka)

by Tiffani   Oct 17, 2005


Bright sandy beaches,
Waves splashing across my face,
My own Paradise,
It is the place i dream of,
I wish I was there right now.

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a Tanka is a poem with 5 lines,
5 syllables, 7, 5, 7, 7

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  • 19 years ago

    by Tiffani

    ADEL u always amaze me, i think u have commented on every poem i have, thank u so very much my friend...
    Love Tiffani