by Jamie Oct 18, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Ready to manipulate the paper |
by Shy
I love this poem. you should get it copyrighted. i wish i could write poems like that yet again 5/5 |
by Britney
Wow awesome job! very unique poem and i absolutely loved it! I really enjoyed the begining of the poem though it really got me interested, anyways great job! keep up the great work! |
by Ixora
I love ur poems this is one of my favorites..yea i meant ignore..well i cant write or spell but hell here i am lol...anyway thanx for the comment im glad you enjoyed it...keep it up... |
by Pure Silence
Haha like many others i was confused at first but, reading it through again its a wonderful poem and it made me think, not many peoples poetry can do that:) keep it up! |
by þŗ℮††ỵ ġįŗłş мåk℮ ġŗåv℮ş. ♥ ××
I agree with torn apart and purple fears. you are such an amazing writer, and i bet your an amazing person too...dont put yourself down hun. you have heaps of talent. that poem was awesum...i love it so much, especially the last four lines...very imaginative =) your a very powerful and emotional writer...keep it up xx |