Omg.. that is such a great poem! i love it!! well done!! keep up the good work.. bec x x

That was great. I got watery eyed when I read that. I cant wait to read more of your poem.
Keep it up.
Neca

Great rhythm and flow, and you're right its very sad. The story seemed to have a bitter-sweet texture about it, like they wasted so much time that they could have been together because they were undecided.

Good Writing!
beth

BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!!! This poem had it all. My heart ran the gammut of feelings as I read. You are a very good writer. I have enjoyed reading your work. (Sometimes through teary eyes though)

This poem is so beautiful and sad tears came down my eyes!!!!!!!!!!

Aww!! that is so sad!!! so good though you have such talent!

That is so sad but very well written i give it 5/5
take care

holly

Aww this is a real sweet poem, but i hope it isnt true

Hm... i can relate to this poem so much.. 5/5 for sure

Wonderful poem, just flowed all the way through, actually brought a tear to my eye, so emotional and full of feeling, WELL DONE!!!
take care xx

That's really sad, I like your rhyming flow though they fit nicely. This would be really cool developed into a story.

I LOVE THIS POEM PERFECT PERFECT LOL your a really good writer

Nice poemm. Really sad, but good.

Thats amazing omg well do 10/5 if i could giv it its so gd omg i dunno what to say just amazing truly amazing

This poem is really sad, but really great. Good job.

The perfect poem.

Aww thats so sad

Aww. That was awesome.
Really touching

That was really good! i don't normally read love poemz, but that one was a great job!......5/5

Awsome poem!!!!!!!!!!!