There was moment that, this poem doesnt need a vision to see... words of the poem made me to visualize what was the feels and situation... :) /.... :.(...

Obviously this can touch any reader...I liked their departing bt coming together again n agan .its nice

So sad and touching, but amazing. You are my poet inspiration :)

I love it i told everybody i know to read it and i bet you about 90% of them cried one word describes this poem. Inspiring (=

Loved this poem cried when read and very inspiring props

Im so mad right now that im reading this at work n started to cry in front of patients... loved the poem though 5/5!!!

Wow love it......

This poem brought tears to my eyes
you are an amazing writer
REALLY GOOD POEM!! ;)

Fantastic poem. You really know how to reach into the hearts of the readers and touch them. Great job!

I guess I am reading it for the 20th time now . . . And every time it just give me the goosebumps . . . Very very well written

Killerly superb it is....

I love this poem!

Wow, that was some poem..
must have took a lot of thought..
really nice work..
keep it up!!

Part 2????????

Omg, such a powerful and tear jerking piece. How devastating. It is such a powerful write because you tell the journey of a love which is on and off and on again and when it seems like things are finally working out for this couple, fate has different plans for them.

i liked the repitition where you mention loving someone else, and it worked great in the end of the poem, I think this is the bit which will capture the tears of your readers.

The imagery of holding someone in your arms, in the middle fo the street and having to watch them slip away is just breath taking and unimaginable.

Amazing poem.

It really touched my heartt...great one!!

Dat was nice...wonderful representation of the pain..anyone can be dragged into this beautiful lines and they in the end wud definately feel gr8 sadnes..

Sad

Sheesh i started reading this poem for the heck of it. and i couldnt stop reading. great job 5/5

I started reading this poem for the heck of it. and i couldnt stop reading. 5/5